Grimbeau

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Burnt Ochre

by grimbeau

oriflamme buoyant 
october amber banner
russet ferns golden
smokey purple elephant
aubergine eggplant graveyard
fetches fade moisturising

Published: October 6, 2016

Filed Under: flash fiction, Magic Realism, Poetry, writing

Tags: afternnon sun : colour blaze : roast chestnut

4 Comments to “Burnt Ochre”

chrisbkm says:

October 6, 2016 at 11:57 pm

are you sure about that?

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- grimbeau says:
  
  October 7, 2016 at 8:47 am
  
  about what, Chris?
  
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  - chrisbkm says:
    
    October 7, 2016 at 12:38 pm
    
    I’m not sure. I read a few times and my smile kept broadening and each time I just thought to myself…. are you sure Grimbeau? A fine collection of sound, image and stretch… as always.
    
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    - grimbeau says:
      
      October 7, 2016 at 1:20 pm
      
      thanks Chris, no, I’m not sure either, late afternoons in autumn play weird tricks
      
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